Awww, this was wonderful. I love that Dudley started making amends for his past behaviour and that he took Draco in. The rest of it was so hot between Harry and Draco, all that wonderful pent-up emotion / UST.

This line really got to me early on: He deserved the rotten fruit being thrown at him more than that look on Potter's face.

Then later I really liked this line, so good: "The fact that I’m touching you, that reality burns through me."

Oh, and Pansy was just hilarious at the end. ;)